All of The Unknown

Desolation.

It's all around.
Lost in this frown.
Falling down the stairs the crown.
Nothingness leaves a subtle sound.

All of it finally leads to oblivion.
Forgetting kings.
Leaving the lake shaking with rings.

Reviews

[ewest1220]

Once again a very powerful piece! I loved this one and am adding this to my favorites! Great work my friend!

[Justin Flume]

Thank you (;

[Coyote Poetry]

Each line making a point and create a different vision and thought. A interesting poem. Could lead to more story or poetry. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Morrigan Nicole]

I liked how the lines it this poem were not complete sentences, but rather tidbits of them, with the main part written out. It gets your point across well.