Your Death, My Pleasure

I meant for it to be nice...Well it didn't end that way..a bit of a twist.

I just want you to know who I am,

With loving arms open wide,

The size of the Earth,

With bright caring eyes,

 

I’d give up forever just knowing how you feel,

If it’s true,

Or is it just another game?

Waiting to be crushed,

 

With only myself to blame,

Now isn’t that a shame?

With knots so deep,

And an overwhelming heart,

 

It’s just a game right?

Your blood now on my hands,

The tables have been turned this time around,

Look who won now,

 

With your blood spilt on the floor,

Heart fearing for light,

When darkness is all you can see,

Dark, frightening, horrid,

 

Now you see how I feel,

Isn’t it the best?

I think so,

How do you feel about it now?

 

Maybe you’ll learn your lesson now,

Thing is,

You’re a bit late,

Your death is now my pleasure,

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

Once again another dark and angry piece written with true prescicion and honesty. The feelings are well developed, the unexpected enjoyment of the murder which is very well done and creativly written.
What a definite end, perfectly done.

[Serena Kaye]

Haha, thanks!

[Bridger Hall]

i like this. you have your own style for sure. and i dont really get into the death dark stuff. but i enjoyed it. thanks.

[Serena Kaye]

Awe, thanks! Heh, yeah I do.

[Tai Ryens]

The last two stanza's were very well placed. Well done.

[ewest1220]

I would take it a step further I see twists all over the place. You set it up very well I like it a lot.

[Serena Kaye]

I think I am now that I think about it. Thanks.

[Serena Kaye]

I just added more..If you'd like to read.

[ewest1220]

Phew that one got dark! Love it good work I love what you added in as well that was a great touch.

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you! Hehe, I'm a bit of a dark person...

[ewest1220]

Ditto lol

[Serena Kaye]

Haha