Wake Me

Wake Me

A Poem by Serena Kaye
"

Someone just wake me up.

"

You still take my breath away,

Even though,

It's only a dream,

White and fluffy,

Scratch that,

It’s more like,

Dark and horrid,

Replaying it,

Over and over,

Day after day,

Tears after tears,

When will this be over?

Or does it even matter?

This night terror is eating me alive,

Someone,

Do me a favor,

And wake me,

© 2012 Serena Kaye


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Serena Kaye
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Eve
embrace it, the pain comes from not being able to claim your own power.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh, thanks.:3
The faint glimmer of sorrow is present in this piece, especially in the ending of it. I enjoyed this. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thanks.:3
I don't know if it was meant to be mysterious, but there is a lot of mystery in it^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Ehh, so s.
Thanks for reading!
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

My pleasure XD
You might not know, but I do - I liked it. :) The only bit I didn't care for was the dichotomy between saying it was White and fluffy to dark and horrid - why? I think I know what you're trying to convey with that, but it seems just too out of the blue. But don't get me wrong - I really do like this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

It's a twist, between what I want it to be and what it really is.
Thanks for reading!
the franticness and desperation in this pice leave me wanting more. Great piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
really well written, the layout of the poem perfectly reflects the franticness flow. great job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thank you! Heh..(:
well this is so much better than the last one...Great in fact....Terrific finale

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Heh, I agree once again, thanks!
that's desperation in it's finest form. excellently written. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

7 Years Ago

Thank you!(:

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Added on July 23, 2012
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