Night Terrors

Bye,

That’s all that’s left to say,

Why?

The only question I have left,

Blue lights,

Devils thoughts,

Gun powder,

Wishing mind,

Eyes set to waste,

Deep blue,

So true to you,

When the lights,

Go away,

Stuck in this Hell,

With nothing,

But the sound of music,

Trying to lift,

Come on, come on,

What’s left to rest?

Getting away with almost everything,

Just that taste,

The taste of your soul,

Just need it to roll around,

Never sleeping,

Never waking,

Dreams to night terrors,

Night terrors to life,

Oh why?

They are alive,

Night terrors,

Reviews

[Androglossia]

I would like to think of it as the thoughts that haunt you everytime you close your eyes. No matter how hard you tried to escape the tormenting thoughts, it just won't go away because it is within you. It is your fear, your weakness, the reality.

Dark and haunting. Abstract.

[Serena Kaye]

Exactly, thank you.

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome:)

[Tai Ryens]

Intense vision of a nightmare indeed.

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks Ryan.

[TheJordBaker]

powerful indeed. the pace and snippets are perfect in summing up the breaking of a person's mind. well done :)

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you!(:

[Persephone]

I like the confusion and quick pace of this poem - it is reminiscent of how our minds work - great work!

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you.

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This is intense. Good job:)

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you!(:

[kublakhan27]

Powerful piece^^

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks.

[kublakhan27]

No problem

[Tim]

It must be incredibly unnerving to have to experience such horrible dreams. It sounds like you've condensed a journal of terrible memories into one poem filled with such profound recollections. I hope you can find a better life ahead. Deep writing.

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, kinda.
Thanks!