Loving A Sailor

Loving A Sailor

A Poem by Unoriginaly Original
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Just expressing what it's like to love a military man

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First you're close, 
then far away.
Even if I wanted,
you couldn't stay.
Don't fret my darling,
my love can last
Another month, even a year
'till you come back, when you get here.
So rest in ease, cease your fears
because the worst had passed, we've dried our tears.
Loving a sailor is not as wearying as missing him,
but the rewarding bond is more strong than it is thin. 
My heart isn't breaking, it's lightly stretching
For true love is not the feeling, it's the decision of enduring

© 2017 Unoriginaly Original


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Unoriginaly Original
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The final line "Its the decision enduring" is great. Very true. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 15, 2017
Last Updated on February 15, 2017
Tags: military, love, navy, IT, loneliness

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Unoriginaly Original
Unoriginaly Original

Milton, FL



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Well, hello there. I'm Jewelz, a teenage writer with no ambition to become famous or known. Literally that. I write to write, I'm a passionate lover to music, I do what makes life enjoyable and ha.. more..

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