Defining you

Defining you

A Poem by Untalented Creation
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Not quite a real poem but this came to my mind & I wanted to write it down (:

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You're old wood and bark of the finest tree

You're cinnamon and chestnut brown

You're the warmest light beam, that makes me feel home

And Sometimes you're bright red and garishly green flood light at the same time colliding and turning into the softest kind of yellow light that leads me through a cold, dark night

You're a neverending mistery that still fills me with joy

& at the same time you're my oldest, best-known cuddly toy


© 2016 Untalented Creation


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A amazing poem. I like how you used the description.
"You're a neverending mistery that still fills me with joy
& at the same time you're my oldest, best-known cuddly toy"
The above lines are sweet and realistic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Untalented Creation

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing this reality inspired poem :D (:
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I'm glad and you are welcome.



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Such a beautiful and emotional ride this poem was. Well put!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Untalented Creation

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. Its much appreciated
(:
A amazing poem. I like how you used the description.
"You're a neverending mistery that still fills me with joy
& at the same time you're my oldest, best-known cuddly toy"
The above lines are sweet and realistic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Untalented Creation

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing this reality inspired poem :D (:
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I'm glad and you are welcome.
Mmmm....this is "cute" due to the toy, but in the beginning it even sounded a bit romantic - as with most novels and movies, romance always succeeds the best because people have a natural tendency to like them.....

But we like teddy bears too.....:P

Posted 8 Years Ago


Untalented Creation

8 Years Ago

The teddy bear part is a metaphor.^^ It's actually about loving someone.
SleeplessVolcano

8 Years Ago

Aahhh.....I nearly got it.....:)

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Added on January 9, 2016
Last Updated on January 9, 2016
Tags: love, friends, friend, you, speechless, mindless, obsessed, tree, metaphor

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Untalented Creation
Untalented Creation

Germany



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As you might guess from just looking at this. I’m neither a native english speaker nor a talented person. But I’ve got a crazy mind that won’t stop me from doing something creative. .. more..

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