ME

uhhhh.... me?

Anger Sadness

Empty Silence

pain from within,

Why? Why?

 

Burning Fire

Suffering Starving

hidden away,

Where? Where?

 

Life Death

Beyond Behind

Anger Overwhelming

When? When?

 

Explosion Fire

Love Hate

lashing out killing,

What? What?

 

Suspicion Desire

Jealousy Devontion

with no trust

no love.

Who? Who?

 

Me.

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

How? How?

Did you manage to write such a piece? Normally, I do not care about styles and forms. I am one of those rebels without the talent to write with much style and could no more write in form than I could color inside the lines.

This work, though, the combination of its overall style is amazing. Ignore the fonts for a moment and simply look at the words. The patterns are tight. There is so much there, I feel like I am still missing parts of what is going on within the intricacies of the style itself. Adding in the fonts, the changes are perfect. This is a visual piece if there ever was one.

[QuietPoet]

Very creative and its heartbreaking.. Great write.

[Save the Trees, Save th..]

wow that is awesome

[Jacky Bones]

and that kids is how you wrestle a bear

[AmeliaRose]

That poem was so sad but the details are great! it flows well too! great job! i really like this