If I, would you?

If I, would you?

A Poem by UpComesDown

If you were still here,

would you help me?

                    or

                    hurt me?

 

If you were still here,

would I still love him?

                      or

                      love you?

 

If I was with you,

would the pain cease?

                            or

                            grow?

 

If I was with him,

would I find true happiness?

                      or

                      utter depression?

 

If, oh if, we were together,

what would I do?

Would I laugh

               or

               cry

               or

               smile

               or

               die?

 

What would I do?

Oh, what would I do?!

© 2009 UpComesDown


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UpComesDown
Fianlly catching up on old poetry...

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its amazingly good the style is truely unique in every way... keep it up>>>>.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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