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A Poem by K. Louis

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1 5 6 3 


hygiene poor 
appetite poor
morale rapidly decreasing
vision -  none
     

© 2014 K. Louis


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which begs the question, Day 1563, of what? Illness? Stranding? Self-imposed isolation? a bad marriage? hostage?

it makes the imagination work, even as the descent described in so few words, chills.

the poet in me is impressed. the human in me hopes that this is not a real status update.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow, I see this as the trappings of woe...a relationship that feels like being a castaway alone on an Island...


love the analogy...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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