"GEE!"

"GEE!"

A Poem by Valentine

       "GEE!"

Of all of the words,
That could have been said;
Those repeated...
Left this heart dead.

Now...words are spoken,
To unthaw my heart,
They come much to late;
To give love a start.

You had your chance;
And...you blew it!
Perhaps in time...
You will get through it.

You say you spoke in haste;
Gee...what a waste!

   Valentine

© 2015 Valentine


Author's Note

Valentine
Getting some of my humor back.

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wow amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valentine

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by. Kathie
Gee is such a multiple use word as if is the largest word in respect that it could make the difference in so many ways.Gee I wonder if one could be rejected in haste as speaking too hastily. Gee we may never know nicely penned Valentine I think we all need to slow down and stop acting hastily

Bill

Posted 4 Years Ago


I learned what gee meant before I learned to talk. (my grandfather drove a delivery wagon and took me along for company.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valentine

4 Years Ago

Smiling, I think it was 'gee' and 'haw'. My grand dad rode in those too. Kathie
a clever observation...well put into a good poem !

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valentine

4 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie, always appreciate you stopping by. kathie
A sense of who we are is always in our words...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Valentine

4 Years Ago

Can't be serious all of the time, laughter is good for the soul. Kathie
I do like your humor;) Well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


Humor is a good thing. Makes Me Smile for you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You are right dear Poet. Love words must be timely.
"They come much to late;
To give love a start."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Humorous and a life lesson: think before you speak :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


nice humor Kathie, i guess you told him so huh! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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