Pain

Pain

A Poem by Emily Jellybean :)
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Pain.

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Pain is a mixture of love and hate. 
Pain is something you cannot mistake. 
Pain is what makes you sick. 
Pain is what makes your heart tick. 
Pain makes you want to die. 
Pain wants to make you cry. 
Pain. 
The mixture of good and bad. 
Pain. 
The mixture of happy and sad.

© 2010 Emily Jellybean :)


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Great Poem. It was short, but very to the point. It was soft, but had a sharp blade. I liked the use of the word Pain. Repetition is one of my favorite writing techniques! Have a merry Christmas!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Emily Jellybean :)
Emily Jellybean :)

Sparkman, AR



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I am simply Emily. Words hardly describe me, however I’m pretty much an open book. I hope you enjoy reading me through my poetry. Feel free to leave a review or two! :) more..

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