beautiful broken eyes

I see the world awaiting me. 
I see the universe in my very eyes. 
I see the deep blue sea. 
I see dark shadows. 
I see a little girl with so much to live for but so little to wrap her arms around and call her own. 
I see her saddened soul inside her blue crystal eyes. 
I see a broken heart, 
Mended by little lies. 
All behind her beautiful, 
but broken eyes. 

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

deeply moving~

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sad poem, With emtion flowing through out it!

[xjust-for-me.x]

a sad and poignant write..very well written hope to read more of your poems.

[OT]

I really like this - it's sad and you successfully conveyed the emotions!! this is a good poem!! (and thanks to linear for RR)

[InkSlinger]

such a touching little ditty, love the flow, and the simplicity.
Sometimes just enough, is more then enough to satisfy the senses..
Well done Emily..

[Kaitlyn]

this poem.. is WOW... I personally love it.. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem written with emotion and sadness. Each line made the poem stronger. I like the description and the ending. You create a vision of a sad and a lonely woman. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

It's beautifully written with fantastic descriptions. You really bring out the emotion with the images as you go through the story and idea.

[Hollow Man]

Sad and beautiful

kgs

[Linear]

You tug at the heart with this poetry, emotions flow into and over it with the tears of a young broken hearted girl, very well done