You and I

When I posted this, I was so in love and so happy with where I was in life. Now, I look back on this and sincerely miss the feeling of being desired and being 'it' in someone's eyes.

Maybe one day I'll give this to you,

But for now it's just a page here in my notebook,

Home to thoughts lacking sanity to some extent.

I always come to this notebook,

Fashioned with a somewhat twisted Alice in Wonderland theme,

When an influence of some sort takes hold of my mind.

But I write to you now in such a state of clarity,

High on love....

 

I've never met someone

With such a nack for giving me infinite butterflies,

Someone with such sincerity swimming in their eyes.

Those eyes,

I could lose myself in.

 

I've never craved someone's touch like I crave yours,

Gentle as well as passionate,

Always considerate while satisfying.

I'm constantly captured by the thought of you,

Your arms around me,

The taste of your lips....

I feel like we're tuned to the same frequency,

And I find it hard to part from you.
I'm always reluctant to pull my lips from yours.

 

If one-thousand forces are against you and I,

I'll conquer every last one of them

With just the love in my heart.

Reviews

[Francez]

Really romantic and passionate.
I like how you capture the emotion and passion, and your description about your notebook & writing urge.
'When an influence of some sort takes hold of my mind.' I really can relate to that.
Well done!

[Broken.]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.

There is no possible way to make this any better, any clearer, or any more passionate and loving than it is just like this.

BTW, I think you should give this to him..

I think he would love it more than I do. For once.