Cover

Tears

Tip-tap rain, pour down!

Keep falling, so I can feel.

Camouflage my heart.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is very clever
very cool with end line
thanks for entering my comp write 5 lines and under

[AizenJ]

Thank you for the review and thank you for starting the contest. I just thought of joining one so I can see where I am as an amateur writer. Ha ha. Anyway, thanks for reading. ^_^

[Final-Karma]

Short, elaborate, and great imagery. I love it! Thank you for sharing.

[AizenJ]

I am glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading.