Each Moment

Ghazal

Though my tears are drying each moment,
my dainty heart is yet crying each moment.

You try to heal these sores of mine, dear,
which you are supplying each moment.

You bring all the sighs upon my visage.
You ask why am I sighing each moment.

Yes, I have put a finger in both my ears.
Why is your voice amplifying each moment?

I didn't make mistakes, but you did, dear.
Whom are you rectifying each moment?

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

You have so much clarity in your work, A rare trait:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you for your kind review.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Vatsal, this is a very beautiful ghazal. A very good use of "kaafia" and each couplet has a lovely and deep meaning. If you could work a bit more in the meter to make sure the number of syllables in each line are equal, this would be the perfect ghazal.
It is a treat to read this and keep writing. (:

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thanks for your kind review. Syllable count seems to be an adversary. Though I will try to befriend it and improve.