Anything Right

a complaining poem about not being close to halfway perfect

I sang a song and thought I was good, until I heard Samantha Hood.

She sings songs very beautifully, people give her way more praise than  me.

I decided to write poems tonight and figured that I couldn't even get that right.

I read other's poems way better than mine and it makes me want to give up every time.

I dance my butt off night and day, hoping my pain will somehow go away.

I put it on video and people don't care, so looks like I can't do anything right there.

I'm good at nothing, just nothing at all. How much harder can a person fall?

I have to deal with myself every night, I just can't do anything quite right.

I hate myself sometimes, but the again I don't, 

I want to harm myself at times, but then I just don't.

Something has got to give, I always try and and try, but

getting things half way just won't get me by.

No matter how hard I try, no matter how hard I fight, 

I just can't seem to do anything right.

Reviews

[zainul]

Hello Lena,
I beg to disagree with you.
You have written lovely poem.
Please don't regret.
Life has something to offer to al.
Have patience.