Three

Three

A Poem by VennelaMargame
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A brief love poem, to a very special someone.

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I go with Grace, and she with me,

The world makes us a trinity.

The jovial cosmos shakes our hands.

It walks along beside.

 

Our looks are double, thoughts are squared.

The universe might be impaired,

But by our providence it stands

Tide after starry tide.

 

No blasphemy is this, no sin;

We glorify the gods within.

We sow our seeds in solar lands,

With earthy blossoms pied,

And every fruit bears sugared moons inside. 

© 2014 VennelaMargame


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¡Bra-vo! Bril-liant! Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


This poem is very beautiful and sweet. And I wish your relationship all the best. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 6 Years Ago


VennelaMargame

6 Years Ago

Thank you, kindly.
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
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It is wonderful to see love depicted so wonderfully in words that are enriched deep in meaning. I wish you all the best in your relationship

Posted 6 Years Ago


This paints a picture of a very, happy-go-lucky relationship. Very pleasant read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


VennelaMargame

6 Years Ago

Thank you. The most important thing is to be fun friends together, I think.
Well there you go. You found your Muse. Keep her close to your thoughts. Your creative spirit will thank you for it in the end. Beautifully written my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VennelaMargame

6 Years Ago

Thank you, kindly. I've told her that she feels like my Muse. I hope we can inspire each other to go.. read more
Muse

6 Years Ago

Well if I were you, I'd share this poem with her. Trust me, girls like that kind of stuff. :))
VennelaMargame

6 Years Ago

Oh, believe me, she'll know about it. I'm also working on composing a sonata. Not really dedicated t.. read more

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Added on June 14, 2014
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Tags: love, romance, cosmos, metaphor, three

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I want to apologize to any friends on here for how long I've been delinquent. I need to get back on here, clear my backlog of read requests and get writing again. Best wishes all. more..

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