Poisonous Wonderland

Like tiny butterfly kisses,

Lies passed through his lips,

Slow, subtle, and unnoticed,

She let them caress her,

Fill her,

Carry her away with hope,

They was believed,

Much like fairy tales,

And magic dust.

Wishing on falling stars,

And magic eyelashes.

Then like a great knife,

Cutting at her heart,

The truth attacked,

Using all its strength,

The guillotines blade came down.

Chopping off the heads of every hope,

Every dream,

And every thought.

Their blood spilled,

To the rotted floor,

And infected her world.

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Gorey good stuff here "The guillotines blade came down.
Chopping off the heads of every hope,
Every dream,
And every thought.
Their blood spilled,
To the rotted floor,
And infected her world." I find this poem to be rather interesting. Good work

Chaos_Collector

[ChinaDoll1928]

Thank you so much, at first I was afraid that it would have been a bit much for this poem but I'm so glad you find it interesting. :)

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome. I'm glad you left those lines in the poem. Great detail and imagery there as well :) keep up those writes!

[khalid]

sometimes we love somthing so we accept it, enjoy it, live it..although we aready know it is a lie..
very nicely penned..

[ChinaDoll1928]

Thank you so much!

[khalid]

you're welcome..