My Grapes' Wrath

When things go sour.

Grapes are amazing,

Grapes are supreme.

They come in reds,

Or my favorites: green.

Fresh they are succulent,

And oh so sweet.

When they start to ferment,

They are an even better treat.

My toes start to tingle,

My eyes open wide.

It makes me eagerly show,

What I eagerly hide.

I dance upon tables,

I fall upon floors.

I bounce off of walls,

And straight into doors.

 

And so the last I remember,

On the thirty first of December.

Was not the ball of New Year's Eve,

But my dinner I did heave.

Author's Note

Ah the many uses of grapes. Who knew a childhood fruit that made the jelly in a pb+j could lead to such results?

Reviews

[Summer]

Intriguing work. ;)

[Rosa Carlyle-Mitchell]

Grapes are indeed, excellent. Nice concept.

[Mockingbird]

wow. didn't see that coming. i love grapes. that initial burst in your mouth the second you sink your teeth in them could be a very orgasmic experience. as for wine, at least you'll remember to have temperance. great descriptive poem.

[Cameron]

Also geez I don't go out and get totally lit. I just thought this would be really fun to play with.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I dance upon tables,
I fall upon floors.
I bounce off of walls,
And straight into doors.

..............nice writing, good wordings, enjoyed. with regards.

[Sunny Skye]

lol! grapes ha. I love grapes my favorite fruit. This is a great poem i surtently (don't know if this word is spelled right :P) enjoyed it.

-Skye

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LOL nice to have a invent read on here and one that made me smile..

[Distant horizons]

superb. wish i'd thought of that :)

And this is what I call a spring and vivid write. Full of humor and winks :) loved it!

[Andrea]

This is so much fun! I like the line "grapes are supreme" cuz I think of things that are considered "supreme" to be totally bad a*s!!!