Heaven's Tears

Heaven's Tears

A Poem by Sigyn

Darkness seeps into the soul

Like the sun has given it's final war cry.

Brother against brother,

The rumble of war,

Lost in the stillness of the icy chill.

 

A flash of white,

A screaming death,

A victim of many,

A last breath,

 

And then it's gone.

The sky splits like a sword to the heart,

Pain as hard and as pointed as crystal daggers,

Fall to the weather hardened ground.

 

The heavens bleed grace. 

© 2011 Sigyn


Author's Note

Sigyn
This was my poem for the 'I challenge you' Group challenge, called Humanity. You had to write a poem for a picture. I'm on my iPhone doing this, so the picture will be uploaded ASAP.

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The words you used to expression the passion in this poem is really phenomenal. I don't think I've seen better out of you! This is fantastic. I approve.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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wow this has such power such energy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Absolutely beautiful! loved all imagery they are very touching and pure. Last stanza was my favorite. Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The sky splits like a sword to the heart,
Pain as hard and as pointed as crystal daggers,
Fall to the weather hardened ground.

The heavens bleed grace.

"WOW" i love these words. I really enjoyed this write. Written so well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


crystal daggers the heavens bleed grace, to have to live through war, death and mayhem one may chose to fall under one of those crystal daggers and have the grace of death give them peace of mind. One could say that your poem is happening right now in our world. Very good write and I am happy you accepted the challenge and wrote something wonderful.

Excellent :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 15, 2011
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Tags: storm, humanity, grace, crying, thunder, lightning, death, war

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