Tears made me sad

Tears made me sad

Her exhaled breath was like scent for me,

Her smile with dimples was like resurgence of my soul,

Her glossy hair was swirling around mine,

Her eyes too were gazing at mine,

My fate was written on her brow,

But the stream of the tears flow from her eyes was like downpour for me.

How could I see her crying If I truly was in love with her?

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[ShowtunesGiraffe]

I love how this poem shows deep love for someone. I also like the expression "my fate was written on her brow". Very poetic! Lots of beautiful imagery as well.