Going home

Going home

A Poem by Victoria Lee~

 

Going Home
 
The car feels like its flying
yet I am only driving
A trail of dust is all I leave behind of 
Forgiving myself for past mistakes
Knowing I will never be as perfect
as I want to be
I can only be me
And that's ok
I am free from those that judge me
and see only what they want to see
Laughing as the mile markers past right by 
 
Leaving seven years of bad luck
looking forward to only what the future brings
Thoughts of bridges left burning
Peace in knowing
I was not the one that started the fire

Knowing, it's ok to walk away
Threw my cards on the table
Listened to my guardian angel,
who told me, Baby, it's time to hit the road
 
Time to let go of that heavy load
The weight on my shoulder is lifted
As I drive to the only place I'll ever call home
 
My spirit is soaring
Ghost's from the past
have finally been set free
I am free to be me
I'm singing my song
Leaving the past behind me
I make my final getaway
 
Keep on driving
Like the Phoenix rising
I'm going home
yeah,  I'm going home
 

© 2008 Victoria Lee~


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As I read your brave poem I was thinking how it would be a great song. I like how you bolded certain words. I can feel you being set free as the words flow. There are no regrets between the lines--only tons of perfect words that add up to one fantastic piece of writing here! I've always loved the story of the Phoenix making a funeral fire out of the sticks from the past and rising out of it, flying and free. Incredible poem, Victoria Lee!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Excellant points... we are human therefore we make mistakes... and some people only see what they want, hey you can't please them all so do whats best for you... I love the inspiration of knowing its time to move forward no matter how difficult it is sometimes. Another wonderfully crafted poem by you.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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What a wonderful feeling to be independent and to leave a bad relationship behind, and hit the road.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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