Adieu

Adieu

A Poem by Vikrantsingh
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Just got inspired from - Margaux "My Pleasure"

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I was felicitous with my aliveness

With my daughter and wife

We had ameliorate chaffers unitedly,

Fallen love, delectation forever and a day,

I was more felicitous with my aliveness now

It turned out to my wretchedness

Banking some more immaterial in my aliveness

Deep in spite of appearance my warmheartedness

I whilst, I got authentic admirer

But no, we were strangers and still we are

So adieu & continue beaming in your world.



 

© 2013 Vikrantsingh


Author's Note

Vikrantsingh
Its all thought flow, not in real - Just fiction.
Just need you reviews :)
- Singh :)

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Hey, Singh. Thanks a lot for the mention here. I don't know that my little poem has inspired you to create a beautiful piece like this.

(Author's note...*friction...do you mean, *fiction?)

Nice images.
The poem is so inspiring. It shows how you love your family and how you would do everything for them. You got an admirer...and now you decide to bid goodbye to her. So good! I salute you for that. Nice decision. You should never try to taste a different "menu" if all the good "recipes" are served at home.

Nice nice nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Wow! I'm simply speechless dearie, Yes, this one is not real its just some random thoughts. I really.. read more
one sky

8 Years Ago

Haha! I have some typos in my review, too but I've seen them and checked right now. In this site, we.. read more
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Very well said Dearie :) I really loved you poem and I went back to my old times and got something t.. read more



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This poem remind me of song good bye my lover good by my friend - james blunt

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
Nice choice of picture and loved the way you potrayed
Good bye to old memories.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)
Amazing Adieu.. I felt this excellent .....

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thanks you so much :)
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Jo
This poem has a life of its own. All those monosyllabic words create an almost galloping effect that makes you almost breathless, before the last two lines rein it all in.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much Jo - Much appreciate your review on my poem :)
- Singh :)
Jo

8 Years Ago

Hi again Singh, sorry, of course I meant 'polysyllabic words' not 'monosyllabic' (I shouldn't work s.. read more
Nicely done, Singh, and I love it when other writers here inspire...it is truly what this place should be about.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kimmer :D
I'm happy to see you back :)

Stay in touch :)
-.. read more
KAOlmsted

8 Years Ago

My pleasure...and thank you. I will.
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Oh, this made me feel humbled to have read such tenderness...a good word for your poetry, tenderness! xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Hehehehe thank you PoppySilver, Thanks for marking my poetry tenderness xxxx
- Singh :)
Ruth

8 Years Ago

So welcome xxx
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

:$ My Pleasure :)
I whilst, I got authentic admirer
But no, we were strangers and still we are
So adieu & continue beaming in your world.

nice poem, liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Prritiy :)

Cheers!
Singh :)
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

welcome :)
The images are stunning, the words though left me stunned. I'm glad you were just practicing capturing the flow of thoughts and not necessarily trying to paint a realistic picture. Impressive impressionism Singh.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thank You So Much Astro *hugs* loved your review and it really encouraged me.
God bless you my.. read more
Astro

8 Years Ago

Never be afraid to fail, there can be no greater way to learn than through failure and no better fee.. read more
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Sure Sir :) Thank You So Much for your help Astro :)
- Singh :)
Last two lines came out so nice
'But no, we were strangers and still we are
So adieu & continue beaming in your world.'

Nice write VikrantSingh Parmar :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dearie :) Stay Blessed :)
- Singh :)
Singh, I like this. There's a courage inside of you to tell that word to someone. I admire that characteristic of yours... but I'm not that authentic admirer, huh? Lol

You made the right decision. You are already happy with your life...why should you put yourself in trouble?

Very good piece you have made inspired by another write. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Same here I have 62 Read Request :( I wrote poem on phone and send one email to my office id and the.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Oh, don't say that you have no time for your baby and wife. Remember, if you love them, you'll do ev.. read more
Vikrantsingh

8 Years Ago

Thanks Dearie :D
You're such a sweetheart :)
Bless you :)

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