Lap of the master

Lap of the master

A Poem by Vin
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" May you all be graced with the truth. "

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It's the time to leave this place
All I wanted to give you was the taste of grace.
I want you to remember that this is not a good-bye
when I've already made you a part of me hereby!

Never drop a tear of grief
for nothing here is bigger than life.
Let it spill when you are joyful,
ecstatic about your being, unaware.

Remember, we all have to go,
but how well we stay before that
is the gauge to see our life
and how deep we touched all around.

When my master was about to part
he touched my forehead and told me:
You did transcend the tangible,
surpassed diseases with ease.
Now all you have to do
is to madden the valley with grace.

That's what I did with you
when all were spoiled without a clue
Don't keep me in you as a person
as I'm the truth which shall never subside.

It's the time to leave this place
All I wanted to give you was the taste of grace.


LOVE...

© 2019 Vin


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Love this for the high originality! Inspirational writing can be a little pigeon-holish & you've broken way free of the cliches. I subscribe to your msg 100%. To live the best life, one must stop worrying about death or infirmity of any kind. The older I get (I'm 63), the more I see old people (my age) divided into two groups -- the ones who live like they are going to live forever & the ones that are completely steeped in their maladies, as if visualizing their decline daily! You give great advice for maintaining a healthy outlook on life & death. You do it nicely lyrical & with graceful imagery that shows instead of preaches (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Thank you for that.

HUGS



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Touching and beautiful. I was greatly inspired by your words. Thank you for the read request.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Sending my love to you!
Lea Sheryn

1 Year Ago

Thank you! Much love!
I super enjoy it, such great write, nowhere near preachy! Written with both GRACE and style!!
Very well done from me!!!
Stay well :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Lots of love to you for the words. This keeps me writing
Beautiful...your Grace is sufficient...I am empty but alive in your hands...the truth will set you free- the truth is love...for all to see...🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Thank U for this. Love to you!
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌈🌈
This is a really good write, throughly enjoyed this

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Thank U. Power to you
a very spiritual write that is not preachy in the least...hints of what is a truth...grace is within all of us...we just have to find it and use it...
be it.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Thank u J- wish you all the grace and happiness

LOVE
I did not see this one coming. It is a truly exceptional write in both content and in style.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Glad! Will try to surprise you with every writing

LOVE
Getting the most out of life is important, for sure. Remembering where you're from, being kind, treasuring the ones you love and who love you. I enjoyed your write, Vin. I look forward to more from you xx

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

Thnk U and I will write for you :)

LOVE
There is much to be said for living each day as though it was our last. Some people's lives are cut short without any notice whatsoever. That really puts things into perspective. This is an impressive write. Well done.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

All we have to do is what we can- if we don't do what we can life is a disaster.

LOVE
Yes, we have to live every moment we have on this Earth to the fullest. Good write!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

1 Year Ago

You got the formula right dear! Now apply it.

LOVE

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