The skeptic

Can you tell me what to write?

I wanna ask each and everyone!

So that life of all will be better

and the world around will be even sweeter.

I don't want to announce my love

neither I want to lament my heart-break.

what is the meaning of art

if it's not good to the world we live.

I want to share my voyages

and awe folks with my adventures;

I have a thousand stories to tell

which can astound all around.

I can write my love, my foes

my ecstasy and even my solace-

but only if it spreads a light

to me within and the mankind.

Either I will not write

or I will make the readers bloom.

I feel what we create

shall serve souls not ego.

This is what that monk told me

do the needy or shut it all up!

So tell me the words and rhymes

that give bliss to the world

and spread grace to our lives,

that excites the humanity

and make the mankind close eyes

and find the succour there is!

Can you tell me what to write?

I wanna ask each and everyone!

So that life of all will be better

and the world around will be even sweeter.

LOVE...

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is such a wonderful, intriguing write 😉

[Fay Slimm]

Hi Vin - -- Your own adventures written in the first person should attract any reader on this site and as you think of your journeys and exciting stories etc. write your thoughts in a notebook until you can sort them into rhymes or freestyle - or anything you like.............. hope this helps and by the way you have written an impressive piece here with its unique ideas. Looking forward to reading more of your work ..

[Chris Shaw]

I write wherever my muse goes. I feel everything should be explored. However, I find my muse often hovers in the natural environment. That is where she is happiest for sure. Let your muse dictate the subject. Nicely conveyed lines vin. Well done.

Chris