Brain-gasm

My imaginations
are like fairy dust
sprinkling their visions
upon eyes that have lost
their ability to see

My words are like X-ray glasses
enabling eyes to see through
into my twisted world
of sex and poetry
and love laced
metaphors

My temperature
goes up several degrees
at the thought of you

Until my breath
caught as our eyes met
and the ache began
to all but bleed
between my thighs

My cervix and my cortex
have been set aflame
I'm ablaze with desire
one kiss from you
would burn
my petal
lips

Climb on top of me
and let your hips sway
to the rhythm of
my heartbeat

Apple cherry sunrise
you tasted pure flow
as I squirted
an orgasmic
cosmos

so now you know
we were the big bang
cause were cumming
infinite realities



By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

Author's Note

Not sure if I like this one but oh well Im posting it anyhow

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

This was excellent. You tell us how your thoughts sculpt poetry and passion. Then you explain to us the idolism of your desire. You sculpt it with the poetic words you told us about in the beginning. This poem exposes a lot of your inner self. It was a wondrous piece of writing.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thank you very much your review touched me because I always tell people if you truly want to know me you can find me completely in my poetry I honestly hold nothing back like I do in my real life ... in reality Id rather take the hurt and pain so no one else has to cause it hurts me more to see them hurting I am honest and I dont lie not even little white lies and I just found out someone I love with all my soul lied to me and Im not taking it well Im not mad Im just hurt and still Im more worried about how he feels so I wont even let him see me cry Im containing it

[Astro]

You know what I like about this one Samantha, it's this. In the beginning your poetic voice seems so poised and you drive home excellent metaphors to express your love and creativity, then just like passion that makes you feel head over heels and forces you to sometimes relent any grip of reason you whip into vivid sexual description where the form of your thoughts become like body parts and then 'you' who is completely comfortable with this type of expression use, otherwise thought of as lewd language to create an incredible final metaphor for 'love'. Your love, the kind that exists in the metaphysical as much as it does the physical. Don't question your strengths in writing this poem, I think it is amazing.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I am in awe of your review... you really get my work its more about love but love is also sex its one in the same to me sex is not to just get off its deeper like poetry... i use to say i view writing poetry as a sexual act more reveling than flash because people most people its just sex and nothing more

[Astro]

Well I'm hip to your style, and happy to have found it. Beat out that poetry, thrust forth your emotions and roll in a sea of seductive sentences leaving behind the literary equivalent to a warm wet spot that was well worth the work. ;)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Wow reading that was very seductive rolling off my warm wet tongue

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

In my mind words are rolling in a sea of seductive sentences

[Astro]

I kind of thought so ;)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Lol im blushing and writing you have just inspired me and im stealing that line about the sea ill give credit to you for it and inspiring it... im on my cell so ill post it when i can use my laptop

[Astro]

No prob, thanks for the compliment and glad to have inspired another soul. Peace.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I got Mobil hotspot so ima try to post it now lol

[Astro]

I'll keep a lookout.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Just posted it ... funny how it was harder to find the right pic well sorta right pic lol

[Tarry Franck]

I certainly loved it. Great job!

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Oh my I like it.... And the apple cherry sunrise made me giggle :)

[BL]

Good thread of double meanings al the way through - nice. When this happens it is more than the universe to us, more than our brains can take

[Saint No-One]

Haha, I really enjoyed the word play and juxtaposing metaphors, this piece was fun and titillating without being crude.

[Barbara Walker]

I love your play on words and
"apple cherry sunrise,
you tasted pure flow
as I squirted
an orgasmic
cosmos"

is my favorite stanza!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

was mine also

[Will]

You leave a lot to the reader while putting together a beautiful and engaging piece. Nicely done

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. You danced on the edge of erotic poetry. Allowing the reader to use their imagination. I love your use of words. Always a field trip into amazing description and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote