GOODNESS

GOODNESS

A Poem by Saumya
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WE, the human beings want success in life.we struggle a lot ,and finally there are only a few who attain it..here are some of those facts which can help you achieve those height of goodness

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If you do good,
You are praised,
If you don't,
then don't be amazed,
because, one day or the other, in the
eyes of others,you'll be raised.

The common question which people
have, is "HOW TO DO GOOD "??
Remember,my dear friends,
"TRUE GOODNESS, MAY BE SOUGHT,CAUGHT,
or THOUGHT, but NEVER BOUGHT"
Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet..

For out in the world, we find,
"GOODNESS and GREATNESS  begins with,
a fellow's will;
It's all in the state of mind..

Always remember,that:
"every test in our life,makes us BITTER  or BETTER;
every problem comes, to MAKE US or BREAK US;
choice is ours here, we are VICTIM or VICTORIOUS.."

You can never change,the obstacles of your life,
nor the defeats you face;
what you can only do,is..
"PROMISE YOURSELF,  TO BECOME THE TYPE OF  PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.

Always keep reminding yourself, that:
"YOU are a QUALITY, not QUANTITY;
YOU are a SOUL, not BODY;
YOU CAN, and YOU WILL,
ONE DAY ...PROVE YOUR GOODNESS".

Lastly, my friends,I'd like to reveal  you a secret, that :
"LIFE'S BATTLES don't always go,
to THE STRONGER or FASTER MAN;
but sooner or later,"THE MAN WHO WINS,
IS THE ONE,WHO THINKS,.."HE CAN"!!

THEREFORE ,"ALWAYS AIM IN DOING THE
BEST OF WHAT YOU CAN" AND;
TRUST ME...
YOU'll REAP BEST HARVESTS OF 'GOODNESS'..


© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
IF YOU FIND THIS WRITING PLEASE DO COMMENT...YOUR OPINIONS ARE HIGHLY WELCOMED

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Hello and welcome to the young adult genre writers group. I selected a work of yours at random to review.
I read your poem about goodness and I have to say that I was struck by one line in particular:

Goodness is the result of being,
too busy to be successful.

I really love this! It has so much meaning to me and I think it summarizes the differences between wanting and doing.

Nice work and keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

6 Years Ago

thank you soooo much...!! :)



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Saumya,
"GOODNESS" was a reminder to be thankful for any goodness within our beings. Not all people in this world have this mindset. Life for many is just impossible and so awful.
We here in the west are so fortunate and may even be proud of our "goodness"
Your poem was a wake up call for people to think and be responsible for the blessing of the very desire for goodness and to be good.
It is a discipline worth working towards! Beautiful poem!
Bless you much,
Kathy
PS.I like philosophical writing . I wonder what you'd think of mine?I come from a vantage point with God's creation as my vehicle of inspiration.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

2 Years Ago

Hey, Kathy!😊

Thankyou so much for leaving such deep thoughtful and insightful word.. read more
A wonderful message filled with wisdom:

"PROMISE YOURSELF, TO BECOME THE TYPE OF PERSON,
YOU AND YOUR HEART really wants you TO BE...and rediscover yourself.


Posted 5 Years Ago


You spoke to my heart. Thanks for sending your healing thoughts to humanity. This is why I love writing and writers.

Posted 5 Years Ago


What a wonderfully inspiring write! Enjoyed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


nice wise words amazing inspirations

Posted 6 Years Ago


This poem really made me think

"It does not come from what you have,
but rather,what you are..
Goodness is not only, the result of hard work,
but also our attitude towards,
all those whom we meet.."

this stanza really got me, this poem demonstrates the truth behind being happy and successful, when it comes down to it, its all up to the individual: If they think they can accomplish something, then they can
thank you for the write, I really enjoyed it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wise life advice in this well written poem. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


It was well written. There was many life lessons within it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, how thoughtful and deep. mow i'm not one for poetry but there are things in there that can be used as a lesson guide in life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very nice poem, Saumya. I wish that, when I was your age, someone had discouraged me from ever growing old. For it is this type of youthful road-map-cum-sign-posts that should accompany the entirety of ones life. Alas, there is a sad discovery that I believe that I have made... it is this; the testing never ends until the end. We may travel 3 days without bread but only one without water. Don't forget the water. These are my opinions and comments. It is what your writing has inspired me to say and I hope you find the words satisfactory and more of quality than quantity.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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