Eminem

Lyrical 

Grandmaster

poetic powerhouse

He spits
the most

detailed
poetically ill

perceived

concepts

Sweat profusely

runs down

his furrowed face
as his speech

increases

velocity
he

Opens
his
chest
on stage

and

Exposes ventricles
that flow with

descriptive words
thru pumping

rhythmical contractions
in purposefully

well articulated increments

his words igniting gorgeous hues
where blue green and red meet
a habit captive of unique words

and

Now

Hidden parts of him

are revealed

to be possessed

his flow comes endlessly
None stop no breathing

Cardiac arrest

D-A-A-A-M-N

This Rapper Poet's Blessed!

Hitting his

flow solo

He speaks

profound messages

that force open third eye

Daring them to see

The innermost workings

of his soul rhymes

This
he does

So
willingly

Because
he shines

As he
dominates

open mic

Spitting verses

intellectually integrated

on the tip of his

tongue

He

Commands Attention

Evokes fragments

of wisdom to come together

and

Thru

The mass

subjugation

of consciousness

He reaches out

to grab minds

Once closed

to the notion

That a

Rapper

Poet can

Miraculously elevate

the status of truth

To instant recognition

Just by his rendition

of

The Spoken Diction

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Just a dedication to one of my favorite artists

Forget his money
Forget his fame
you can even forget his hotness
I'm enamored with his mind and genius talent

Ive never been to a concert but given the chance Eminem's would definitely be my first

always editing and adding new lines to this

I dont like the ending that much

Reviews

[Haley Harrigan]

Yes!! I absolutely adore this!

[Mila]

A wonderful testament to one of the most groundbreaking artists ever! I love Eminem, so this was a joy to read. Well done!

[R J Askew]

I wish I cld fire words out like a machine gun. The best line for me is definitely the one about 'his mind and talent'.

[Lyn Anderson]

I think it is a great tribute. And whether you like rap or not, to dispute his genius is to be a fool.

[DeathHaze]

I say what I want to say and do what I want to do. There's no in between. People will either love you for it or hate you for it.

[Jennie Baron]

I think you sell yourself short on the ending. It's perhaps more evocative of a rap than the rest of the poem.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@tammytownend funny you keep posting the same comment have you even read the poem or are you just gonna add your crap all willy nilly if you keep posting the same nonsense over and over Ill have to block you

youve already said this so what your gonna post the same review on all my stuff well have fun

NOTHING has been proven you will be sued for slander I HAVE NEVER STOLEN POETRY FROM ANYONE IN MY LIFE so believe what you like

how are you gonna feel when its been proven I AM NOT the plagiarist and you've been harassing the wrong person

have you even looked at the posting dates which proves I wrote it and posted it first or are you blind

[Jibey]

A great rap... cpaturing the artist's art and flowing with a rhythm that carries the reader along...