Loss of Sensation

Loss of Sensation

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

Cant speak

Cant breath


Trying not to choke

on the passion
that's trying
to seep
inside
my throat


Holding me
in thrall


Enthused


Confused


My brain

blows a fuse

The flow seeps

through my veins
it highlights
my passions

and showcases my
darkest desires


Just the concept

of the flow
seduces my soul

Now come on Kisses


I know you

want my lips
and all that
my body contains


Placing gentle kisses

all over my flesh
enticing me
with your tongue

Your kiss is cosmic

every move is magic

No longer

an imagination
because Ive imagined
and what I thought
was real was simply
an illusion


I was delusional


My high starts to roll

with the stunts
pushing with
pinning moves

onto the taste buds

Take a bite

of my lips
give it a stroke
across the tongue
encapsulating
circling tracing patterns
and running trails
around my soul

Your kiss was all

I needed to be free

Fulfilling the hunger

that our bodies craved

Let my mouth

stay slick
as it glides

Wanting to swallow

not knowing
which way to go

So just let it

lay around pulsating

Splish

Splash

Y
our slippery
tongue

is so
fast

You got me drowning
in an orgasmic wave

Gently blowing

beautiful sensations
as you stroke my chest
with your fingertips

Softly ever so gentle

with your touch

As my insides erupt

like a Volcano
giving way
to hot lava

flowing
through
my body


Hypnotizing
with your moves

our bodies
will be locked
and bound

our hearts
are opening up

we're falling
into each other


I'm the Earth

your a Cataclysmic variable

A black hole


The cause of such
a tragic fate

the combustion
of these fiery rhymes


Spontaneous
Combustion

more volatile than any
volcanic eruption

dispersing magma
across your terrain
inferno
so rampant
it severs all sensation


By Samantha Campbell

© 2012 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
The line "Your kiss is cosmic every move is magic" is from Katy Perry's song ET it inspired this poem.

A Cataclysmic variable is A type of binary star system where from time to time one star gains some of the other star’s matter. As this happens a huge amount of light is given off.

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The lack of punctuation creates a sort of rushed flow of thought, much like how the mind would be moving at such a point ;) it's a gret capture of such passionat emotions and actions. You get the reader hot without having to put a maturity warning. Well done, ma'am.

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Pretty great for a "virgin" poet!

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Intense. Extremely intense. Wow. I think that was sex, and an orgasm, without even seeming sensual. "Cosmically" brilliant job. :)
Good job on the research, too. Way to get into the topic of your writing. :D

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Lovely flow here, fantastic imagery :)

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Lovely hot, in a kool way. No wasted words. Like that.

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0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this style - and it matches the subject matter perfectly. Your words flow beautifully. Well done - and keep on writing.

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Your writing is light years away from what Katy Perry's stupid brain could ever fathom.. She should be paying you to write her stuff...amazing stuff..I am a huge fan

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0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

experimental write

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0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tastefully walked the line of arousal and seduction. Mastefully crafted with and great flow.

Matthew

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