We Poets are 21st Century Prophets filling up notebooks and screaming on stages
We connect in a fashion
as we wear words
We dance on pages stripping naked
to get you to listen
like what we have to say
can be heard better by eyes
but only 4% of the public
suffers with Sinestesia
And still we slash our wrists with ballpoint pens to get our souls heard
Hanging our pain like paintings in an art exhibit entitled "Emotional Poets"
Wanting Waiting Wishing for an Art Critic to tare us apart
Letter by letter word for word
Because...
Because we are so tightly put together
That we love to be torn apart
We turn the pain into art and scars into deeply embedded ink wells
Don't you see?
We 21st Century Prophets hold the keys to our broken heart cages by wielding pens in ways that spark thought
Cant you see?
Our wrists are still tender yet we slash them open again and again because...
Because writers block is a far far worse form of torture
"And still we slash
our wrists with ballpoint pens
to get our souls heard"
This says it all! We are poets and you have captured our essence with your wonderful words. Yes, we NEED to express ourselves and we want to be read...to touch other lives and to reach out across the world. So emotive and very powerful. Great work. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Do we write for our own benefit or for the admiration of others. It is always a wonderful feeling to write something that we think is good, and have someone else think so too. But often we write and hope to get some recognition, only to have our work ignored. So many write, so few get noticed.
It is that special time when the two come together and make us feel our words mean something.
I am truly amazed by the perfect use of words to describe something hidden behind a synonymous word. You're verses is as lucrative as it is allusive. I'm proud to have come across your work. And the last verse is my favorite ;)
Ma'am excuse me, but there is a stanza which says" wanting waiting wishing for an art critic to tare us apart". if you have deliberately written 'tare' instead of 'tear' then ignore this else you can edit it.
nicely written, very light-structured we really are prophets of the 21st century . a few lines on this context
Unsuccessful Writers are free
Because people hear what they want to hear
Successful ones are their slaves
Thanks Samantha
You're the genuine article aren't you? But, of course you are, that's why I find my way back into your nightclub to glide through the colored lights of your mind time and time again. I really hope you perform this one somewhere, someday, because, fabric of your fashion is dyed to perfection and begs for display. Very cool.
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11 Years Ago
wow thanks yeah one of my dreams is to do spoken word but there is no artistic scene where I live an.. read morewow thanks yeah one of my dreams is to do spoken word but there is no artistic scene where I live and I would have stage fright thats something Ive never even done been on stage not even as a lil kid and I would freeze or something lol but I may try it one day if given the chance
11 Years Ago
Do it in costume at first, imagine you are someone else who's impervious to nerves and hecklers. Th.. read moreDo it in costume at first, imagine you are someone else who's impervious to nerves and hecklers. Though I doubt you would encounter either if you stood and spoke these words with passion. Find a coffee shop willing to set something up, call out to the poetic voices in your area and MAKE a scene.
lol costume good idea maybe but that would make me feel even more out of place I dont care about hec.. read morelol costume good idea maybe but that would make me feel even more out of place I dont care about hecklers I say f**k them lol I may just do that Ive tried to do the whold make a vid of it and put it on youtube but Im such a perfectionist its like lets do another take haha
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Great artists are never happy until it's perfect so, to this I say it's no surprise. Should you comp.. read moreGreat artists are never happy until it's perfect so, to this I say it's no surprise. Should you complete your masterpiece in digital form, grant me access please I would be happy to adore.
11 Years Ago
I may just go the digital route and if I do post it Ill send you my youtube link
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