I'm not giving in.

I think this was from either March or April of '07. Yes, that is kind of old, but I like it. And so do most others. So yeah. Go on and read it for yourself.

Another day. Another heartbreak.

And this time it was you who made me ache.

Another breath. Another chance to live.

But why won't you accept the heart I give?

Another place. Another try.

And another reason for me to cry.

Another time. Another boy.

But to him I'm just a toy.

Another way. Another shot to win.

'Cuz I'll make you love me; I'm not giving in!

 

© SRM '07

Author's Note

Yeeeaaaahhh.
As usual, I want reviews.
And want them to be your honest opinion of my work.
Even if you hate it.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

Short and sharp! I was impressed. You are a young writer with so many years ahead. I see a true poet in you!!!!! WAY TO GO!!!!