The Body, The Mind, The Soul.

You'll see what it's about by reading this. :p

Here we go again in circles,

Just like all our yesterdays.

Was it yesterday we last did this?

Or tomorrow?

This feels like I'm in a time machine,

Spinning endlessly around,

Day to day to tomorrow to today to yesterday,

The way you change your mind changes like a stoplight.

Who are you?

Are you bad?

Are you good?

These questions swirl in your mind.

Body, Mind, and Soul.

The Body lusts after what it can't have.

The Body is frail and not everlasting.

The Body is your only connection here.

The Mind; you.

You, The Mind, change your Mind over and over again.

To get lost in you is to go insane.

You, with your petty trifles and no heart are a killer.

The Soul.

Who is the Soul?

The Soul is I.

The Soul is me.

How long must we be divided and fight?

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think.

Reviews

[iNSOMniAC]

Is there a possible way to love something too much?
The metaphors - the... the whole thing.
I'm bad at speaking, by the way.
Just... whoa.

My favorite lines (and why):
"Here we go again in circles,
Just like all our yesterdays.
Was it yesterday we last did this?
Or tomorrow?" - I love it when authors use tomorrow as a present time. I don't know how to exclaim it, but it's like you're saying that the future needs as much appreciation - as much thought - in everything that it effects. I especially love it when authors say "yesterday" instead of saying the past; it's stating that the past isn't always about the good or bad things. It's about what happened yesterday, and what you can do today to change it.

"Day to day to tomorrow to today to yesterday,
The way you change your mind changes like a stoplight." - If I explained why I loved this part, you'd be perplexed for the rest of your life, and you'd spend endless days trying to figure it out.

"The Body is frail and not everlasting.
The Body is your only connection here." - I love how it says that, even though we are within this piece of flesh, it is not us - our body is but an armor to protect the real values of each person.

"The Mind; you.
You, The Mind, change your Mind over and over again." I absolutely ADORE this. We can't change our mind without changing who we are - since we are always changing our mind and thinking about different things, we are changing, also - we are nothing without our minds. (Which reminds me of my book. xD)

I didn't see any flaws whatsoever... and I honestly don't know how to describe the feeling I got after reading this. Beautiful!!!

[The StoryTeller]

No, there isn't a way to love something too much. :p And lol, I doubt it astounded you that much, that you're at a loss for words. I like those lines too, and that was sort of my purpose, as well as to also describe the loss of time, and how often I get stuck in My Mind. You should explain to me why you liked that part, I'd love to be perplexed. :p I agree, the body is but an armor to our values, and it is also but an Earthly contraption (to me at least) we have until we get to Heaven, when we shall be our souls, which I would assume (people wonder what we'd look like) would be a reflection of our personalities, values, looks on Earth, etc. And lol, adore? That's a bit.... like a fan girl in love with the band she likes.... XD And, I'm no band, and as far as I know (tell me if I'm wrong) you're not a fan girl... Anyways, I'm glad you liked it, and if you ever do get the words to describe how you felt reading it, I'd love to hear them. :D

[iNSOMniAC]

I'm just a sucker for great literature. xD

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, and I'm great literature? Btw, I was wondering, why did you delete your comment? o:

[iNSOMniAC]

Ultra-typo. xD And of course!

[The StoryTeller]

Ulta-tyo? Is ter sch a ting?

[iNSOMniAC]

Heh, nope. xD

[The StoryTeller]

Oay. :adfasP

[luvs2write]

I really liked the perspective on this...don't have much to say, just great job. I like how unique your poems are. Keep writing!!

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you. I wrote it from personal experience (that seems to be what most of my writing is, otherwise it's really bad and dry) and thank you for taking the time to tell me what you thought. :) don't worry, I will keep writing.