Have you ever done something you regret? A mistake so catastrophic that it's wrecked lots of peoples lives? All in different ways? Have you? Did you do it because of revenge? Because of want? Because of anger? Did you have a horrible home? Where you felt all alone? It's like you hear someone calling, but you couldn't pick up the phone? And your world is dark? Acid rain pouring all around, your monster hunting you in the shadows all over town? Have you ever done something you regret?
Dang. It's like you just described my life so far. xD
Great piece - it was written as a story, yes, but it felt like I was reading poetry. Keep writing!
- TPB
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Yeah, I've noticed all of my writing has a flow to it. :)) Glad you liked it. And you don't have to .. read moreYeah, I've noticed all of my writing has a flow to it. :)) Glad you liked it. And you don't have to review all my work tonight...
10 Years Ago
Pbbt! I'm gonna try!
10 Years Ago
Lol, then looks like I'm not getting off anytime soon like I was going too. XD I like to reply to al.. read moreLol, then looks like I'm not getting off anytime soon like I was going too. XD I like to reply to all my commenters. And then, even after we've talked, I still feel I need to reply. You should see the conversations between me and Cool Girl about that in the comments throughout my work. XD
10 Years Ago
xDD I normally don't go into conversations with my friends on here, unless it's about a story or som.. read morexDD I normally don't go into conversations with my friends on here, unless it's about a story or something. Then it usually turns into a casual discussion.
We all learn from our mistakes alright,but regrets? There's precious little you can do about the way you feel when you know you're wrong.
And you, dear writer have put words in those feelings. Could it get any better than this? I doubt.
Thankyou for sharing. Amazing job!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I know, but regrets truly are burdening and kill you slowly. Thank you for reading. :)
10 Years Ago
Welcome! :)
10 Years Ago
:) What about you? Do you have regrets that kill you slowly?
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10 Years Ago
No regrets so far.
Fortunately! :)
What about you?
Yeah. Lots. And lol, why did you delete your other two comments?
10 Years Ago
Because they were similar and my server's down. So i didn't know whether they were getting posted or.. read moreBecause they were similar and my server's down. So i didn't know whether they were getting posted or not!
I'm changing my name from The Resilient One to The Storyteller and trying to start fresh... believing in myself, believing in others, making this new personality I want to have... I guess I was alread.. more..