Infinity Poem

A poem I made from a conversation between The Pain Bearer and I.

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Author's Note

I know it's weird, but tell me what you think, whether it's filling it in with your own poem, telling me what you think of it, or telling me what you think of infinity, or of it just as a blank nothing, waiting to be filled. You know what, regardless of what I ask of you to tell me about it, just tell me what your thoughts are.

Reviews

[Confuser]

It is weird: But I just wrote: Infinity is undefined but Infinity + infinity are words of my love and mine. The pain bearer and me walked into a twinkling shine and unconsciously we were swept to another time...Can't everyone look and see all the universe smiles with ease when love spreads to all humanity = infinity + infinity - forever we live together in peace.

Just wrote this silly thing - refuse to read it again; certain I'll hate it....3 minutes of something....Dale

[luvs2write]

Hmm...an interesting idea, I'll give you that. =) You might want to make the font bigger though, just so people don't skim over the " " and think they missed the entire thing. Or maybe it's just my stupid glasses not doing their job. I think I like it, it kind of lets the reader fill in whatever they're feeling at the moment. Like, for me the empty quote marks would show that my voice and opinion isn't significant or valued or really even heard. Maybe that's just my mood though. =P

[The StoryTeller]

That was pretty much the point, and okay, I'll change the font.

[luvs2write]

..........=)

[The StoryTeller]

It's been done.