black rose

**i found this piece of writing between all my stuff...i had already forgotten that it had ever been written....to be honest, I cannot really recall the inspiration behind this or even the real meaning of it....so just read it and let me know whether you

Black rose

 

Deep inside, beneath it all;

Beneath the echoes of your laugh

The shadows of your eyes

Encircled by a mystic spell

Of long ago and forever more,

Carefully tied with whispered rhyme

I found the black rose

Of broken dreams

 

Reviews

[Constance-Outspoken]

This is enchanting, but honestly left me wishing it continued on...

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is a beautiful piece

[Dane Osborne]

This is impressive. Very good way with words and excellently impressed, kudos:)

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautiful... mystical... moving with a depth into a world deep within... Wonderful written!

[Jasmine]

enchanting...i really like this. short and sweet. great work :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

Its quite delightful..