Despairity

~~~Triquatrain~~~ The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not. Rhyme Pattern: (a,a) b (c,

Sands of time, a world sublime
 

This unforgiving life
 

Try you may, and though you pray
 

The pain cuts like a knife.

Easier each day, or so they say
 

Time will heal

so the saying goes.
 

Tightening rope, losing all hope
 

Despair that no one knows

Wish for good,

 

misunderstood
 

How could things get worse?
 

Strength diminished,

patience finished
 

Your suffering destiny's curse

Thinking negative, no more to give
 

Live each day as it's your last
 

If you were gone, they would go on
 

Left with memories of the past

 

Gone but not forgotten,

begotten
 

A shame things turned out this way
 

When in need, a friend indeed
Came to save the day

Others too busy, drama makes you dizzy
 

They live their life the same
 

Should be so glad,

 

their life isn't this sad
 

And who should carry now the blame.



 

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[Aludra]

;( We all have a connection to the poem, it makes it all the more special.