at first sight...

this is what i mean chelsea..

When I saw you the first time, 
I know not whot I saw in you.
But from that moment on, 
I felt as if everything was really new.

From that very first day, 
You got tattooed into my mind.
Oh I can't get you out, 
Of this head of mine and leave you behind.

Whenever i see your face, 
My heart just starts to pound.
You take my each breathe away, 
And spin my world around.

I could find myself dreaming, 
that once we would be together, 
People say that I'm crazy
But I don't really bother..

Girl, you caught my heart and locked it in, 
with just a glance, 
I wish I could be with you, 
If only I got a chance..

Oh! 'Love at first sight', 
Never thought it could be so true, 
Never thought it could happen, 
Till the day I saw you..

So i ask you on this gentle night-
'if you loved me at the first sight'.
You know I expect a 'Yes' followed by a kiss! 
And a promise that would fill my heart with joy and bliss..


So I propose you under this golden moonlight-
'Will you be my valentine accepting my love at first sight'?

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

This could be so much more with a little bit of editing and revision. I like your message and your subject.
Romantic and playful in words of love.
Certainly supports your title.

[Chidoriflower]

As a pigeon would say, "coo man, coo" This was a nice romantic poem. Liked it at first sight. >3>