Demented

Demented World

Colonization upon our nation of slaughter

Bloody rivers, of our lost fallen fathers

Imprisonment exists, so check your neck for your collar

This is our world, and our corruption is dollars

We’re searching for the answers, but for within our wallets

Printed presidents are burning a hole in our pockets

And a little bit of weed, to unlock what’s beneath

Is only experienced through us dodging police

Clouded, powdered noses; A life only chosen

It’s parallel thorns pricking fingers on roses

Defiance of a higher; programmed, wired

Authority’s contradiction on what’s been written on squires

It’s a corruption of destruction, so hold the hand of your family

And hear the blistering, whistling, that’s truth of humanity

Corruption, destruction; The hand of your family

And the blistering whistling that’s the truth of humanity

I can’t believe, we have to see…

We have to see these dangers

Demented is me, within my dreams

As my passion angers

For the child

The anger cries…

Youth can’t arise

In a world of demented lies

Contemplating eyes, arise shelter for the homeless

Losing focus, from the interfering flying locusts

That relegate and pressure

Until more becomes lesser

And the dead shells on the ground elevate and pester

Within the mind of the dying, and only in time

Will a beaten soul arise, and re-climb

Unto the top of the subject

“The lust when you undress…

Peels the skin from the bone, exposing the loveless.”

And the stress is just a test, crazy and obsessed

Beneath fluent minds…humanity is possessed

For alcoholic causes, the ignorance fallen

Almost relevant to a life that never stops, but just pauses

Almost relevant to a mind that doesn’t think that it’s able

To shuffle the hand that’s been placed upon the table

Just dreaming up existence that seems forever missing

With nothing to show, but the cries of our children!

I can’t believe, we have to see

We have to see these dangers

Demented is me, within my dreams

As my passion angers

For the child

The anger cries…

Youth can’t arise

In a world of demented lies

Hold your golden child, it’s almost over now

Cling to your golden child, it’s almost over now

Let me give you a little bit of history

It means for one time, I need you listening

We’re living by the law of protect and serve…

Us papers. For vapors, where nothing is pure but haters

At the strong arm of the law

Jurisdiction to the system has been seen before

Repeated lies, arise self-contradiction

A groundhog day

Surreal life repetition

 Of Society!!

So many are following

We’re all just a number, another human is swallowing

In which I realize, there is not one right government system

They got a gun in your face, and their finger keeps itching…

I can’t believe, we have to see…

We have to see these dangers

Demented is me, within my dreams

As my passion angers

For the child

The anger cries…

Youth can’t arise

In a world of demented lies

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow, wow, wow.. such powerful emotions and statements.. so much that can be said of this.. and it's truth in raw form!!! Love the way it flows .. I share much of your sentiment.. people judge me thinking I am maybe off key but guess what .. the world is off key!!! Nothing is right.. I do have hope for a better day and times but I fear this is a ways away! Thank you so much for invigorating me.. going to favorites as this one fires me up!!! =)

[The Message]

Well... damn. This is simply amazing! The rhythm and flow of the piece is absolutely exquisite, I could almost hear music. Also, your use of imagery and wordplay really shine through here to create something gritty and brilliant. As I said before, simply amazing.

[Gandré]

Great writing. That's why our nonconformity is important, our ability to critize and to chose - the right, everyone for himself. That's why I don't like TV media and I prefer to read from several channells yet I see, somehow all news are the same, so the danger is: we might have the same opinion? the thing is not to need everything they wanna sell and not to adore everything they want us adore. thanks for your comment on my small 3-liner. happy weekend. lara g.

[MadasonBlue]

This is wonderful. Enjoyed reading it.

[Jaeda]

That was an extremely interesting read, and I like your boldness and truthfulness.

[Fran Marie]

So True~it's a sad world today in which we live

with a throw away society ~ a power-packed piece

which decibes it wwell~Great Pen~Fran

[deeps]

Awesome! Write Such powerful words here
I mean WOW! so truth and raw love this.

[bluessadmood]

What can i say ,its a very sad stupid world,oh i am always reminded of this ..
we could never find a decent life anymore..its just ongoing decline..
everything going down ,no morality ,its all shameless
all the killings ..children starving ..God what a life..
how you put everything in here ..
so very bitter writing but so true..
i really liked this as i like all these writings that tell how rotten our world has become..
lovely write..

[Jwana Creer Yeshua]

That was also a mind blowing poem. The world today is not the best for our children. But we can teach our children right from wrong and hope that they pick the right one. It is not just our people that are demented it is everything. Our TV music and clothes that we wear are also becoming if not already demented. Our Goverment is demented but than again everything happens for a reason. To real understand the world the way that other people see it we need to look inside ourself first. When we start to truly understand ourself that is when we can help our world that is need of helping. This was a great poem. Keep up the good work. I will be looking for more poems from you in the near future. Thanks you sharing.

Humbly,
Jwana Creer Yeshua