Some Bars To Inspire Thought

I'm fond of this - really fond. It speaks a personal truth or two.

It's confusing: everybody's losing

But we're playing in a game where the outcome is our choosing

Matter of fact, your spirit can attract

And manifest at your request

Anything that you could ask.

SIT STILL

BE REAL

TOUCH YOUR SOUL

LISTEN TO THE SILENCE SPEAK AND DO WHAT YOU'RE TOLD

I'm

Unique, La Freaque, better than gold

I'm the one who's seen this many times - my spirit is old

And does it really matter?

Yeah -

his car is nice

her p***y's tight

And she was screamin'

out your name

just Friday night

But does it need a reaction?

Yeah -

her body thick

she ain't your chick

So move on and get past it.

I said move on and get past it.

You're over 30 - still scrappin' for whack s**t.

And if you're hurting - then that isn't a quick fix.

Author's Note

Feel free to review, I often read the writings of commenters.

Reviews

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I really like it form of poem. Very easy to read and very nice flow. Very serious topic , what is freedom , strong will of independence in very poetic manner. My English is not so great so I am not sure , if i understand what you meant. This is just my interpretation of your words.

[Rebekah Smith]

Thanks for your feedback - I like your interpretation

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You welcome . I am glad you like my interpretation.

[Chris]

Diner wisdom - at 4 AM-ish while the coffee chills and the mind wishes...