R.I.P DYLAN I LOVE YOU

R.I.P DYLAN I LOVE YOU

A Poem by Wannabewriter16
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THE DEATH OF MY BEST FRIEND/BROTHER

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                             R.I.P DYLAN I LOVE YOU
Right, when I thought we were getting closer as friends this happens.

I never thought that you would physically leave me here alone.

please, please, please come back because I miss you.

Dylan, you were the only guy in my life that actually cared about me.

You were my lifeline when I needed one and I’m going to miss you.

Like you mean the world to me.

Anyone who says that you and I weren’t friends isn’t true.

Not a single person on this earth can ever replace you.

I will never forget you bubba.

Loving you as a friend was one thing but loving you as my brother was another.

Our friendship turned from just friends to brother and sister.

Very sorry that you had to go like this because I know you didn’t want to be with your dad when you Died.

Everyone that was close to you loved you and cared about you…me and Caira the most.

You touched everyone’s life and made a big difference in mine…for the good.

Our friendship will never, ever be forgotten.

Unlike some of the other people in your life…and mine, I am not going to be the one to forget you.

I love you bubba.

© 2015 Wannabewriter16


Author's Note

Wannabewriter16
Sorry if it's not the greatest. I just found out that he died around 3 A.M. this morning. Please leave a review and tell me what you think.

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First of all just wanted to say very sorry for your loss.

There is a lot of feeling in this poem, which is real and emotional which is great.

A line I particularly liked was

"Everyone that was close to you loved you and cared about you…me and Caira the most."

Work on making it a bit less like ordinary dialogue. But good foundation!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wannabewriter16

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for leaving a review.
You did good, but I'm trying not to think about it because it makes me sad, and I love and miss him.😢😢😢😢

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 14, 2015
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Tags: love, hurt, pain, death, sadness, friend, brother

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