Speaking of That (for Poetic Justice)

a poem about you

 

 

 

 

Don't force a smile, if you're not having fun.

 

Don't spread your wings, if you're pleased on the ground.

 

If the night feels serene, don't burn in the sun.

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And, hun, what's done is done.

 

Drop the regrets,
Don't over do,

 

Just be content,
That you're being you.

Author's Note

Comments and reviews are appreciated.

Reviews

[Cafe Reader]

Really wonderful!

[OR]

WAW amazing
Just amazing !
Happy to see another wise soul
Peace

[An owl on the moon]

There is a gentle wisdom singing through your words... a comfort and a challenge to let go the pain and regret that so often stop us from simply enjoying life... from just being... Beautifully spoken.

[seeeker78]

love this, its very "to thyne self be true" ish, well put together

[Blossom]

love it. its very inspirational

[India Brooks]

This is brilliant.

[Mauricio Montoya]

great stuff here, very insightful.

[Marie Harrison]

Loved this. Wisdom at it's best!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in this poem. You are correct. Need to allow the mistakes and errors to become lessons for us to become better. Complete poem was outstanding. I like the ending. No truer words.
Coyote

[Tala]

Personally I don't like it. It just seems to obvious and blunt.