End Their Fun

End Their Fun

A Poem by Enigma
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I wrote this while watching my dog

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You know its not there, so why tell them?
Why interrupt there fun?
They'll be crushed if you do.

Sometimes you have to tell them, Its whats right.
Other times its wrong.
Whats next?

I see it now, I really do.
Pretending is just as fun.
Spoiling it wouldn't be worth it

Some people think I should have
"Do it, take it away"
I refused and decided to join in.

What harm could I have done?

© 2013 Enigma


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Part of me smiled at your poem's thinking but part of me frowned at the typos .. you've so much talent, try to be more carefu. Type into Word where you'll have grammar and spelling automatically corrected (with careful co-operation from you!)

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