Perditus

I wish I was blind,

I wish I was deaf,

I wish I couldn't speak... nor think.

I wish I couldn't feel... I want to be numb.

I look inside myself, & find nothing but pain.

I have lost hope,

I have lost joy,

I have lost myself, & my life.

The color of my eyes has gone dull,

There is no spirit left in my soul,

I have thrown away my goals,

I have thrown away my dreams,

My heart has decided it can bare no more.

Death is my last choice.

Author's Note

My title, "Perditus" is Latin for lost. Just a note if you're wondering.

Anyways...

Tried to write something darker.

Did it do me any good?

Please read, review, & share! It would mean so much!

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Tragically dark, the pain is certainly affecting. Did you mean to say 'bear' as in to carry, either could work really. And I learned a new Latin word, thanks. ;-)

[Luna Zerimar]

No, "bare" was correct. But, now I know I can use bear. (:

And you're welcome.

Thanks for reading!

[Frieda P]

Both work for me, and my pleasure Jessica! :-)

[FallenAngel]

very interesting, i can feel your pain

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you.

[Simon Welsh]

Nice title. You're coming on as a writer.

[Luna Zerimar]

Thanks, Elliott.

It means so much.

[Justin]

that was really good, i can picture in my head what that person is going through, keep it up :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you. (:

[Dark Poet]

Definitely thoughts that run through my head and many others. I live the title! Good job:)

[Luna Zerimar]

I agree.

Thank you so much!