Distant Memory

Distant Memory

A Poem by Luna Zerimar

My love for you is as deep as the ocean,
I would fight for you like a lion fights for his family,
I would care for you as a mother cares for her own,

But I guess that wasn't enough for you...
I guess you didn't fall for me like I fell for you...

You were the universe,
And I was simply a one-time hookup..

I made you my everything,

..I was always nothing,

The happiness we had ended,
I can feel my heart shatter,
There are sleepless nights,
And my stomach is empty,

You played a good game,
You don't feel any shame,

My love is as deep as the ocean,
You were everything,

...But now you're a distant memory.

© 2014 Luna Zerimar


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Never could figure out why they fall for the bad boys. They take the best of who you are.
The good ones only enhance your best attributes, compliment you, help you grow...yeah, I can see why that would be boring. Much more excited watching a good heart to to stone.
** end of venting **
Great piece of raw and true emotion spilled unto e-paper so accurately.

Thanks for sharing the part of you that hopefully remains


Posted 5 Years Ago


'I would fight for you like a lion fights for his family' love this part! Because some people would really fight like this!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jessica, sweetie, I can definitely feel the pain in your poem here- I'm sorry this has happened to you... but as the old saying goes "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger". If you ever want someone to message or talk to- message me :)

The person you are talking about in your poem- it's their own loss. They could have had you and your beautiful soul but they missed out...

Great poem!
PS: I love your red hair in your new profile pic!

Chloe



Posted 5 Years Ago


that is really good, it has alot of emotions, put together really good :)

Posted 5 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

268 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 19, 2014
Last Updated on June 19, 2014

Author

Luna Zerimar
Luna Zerimar

Houston, TX



About
Which famous Poet are you?I got Edgar Allan Poe - Which famous Poet are you?You're like Edgar Allan Poe. He had a rich, extraordinary, unusual personality which can be quite difficult to describe. M.. more..

Writing
N/A N/A

A Story by Luna Zerimar



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


A dream well aged A dream well aged

A Chapter by Moonie