Sleep

Sleep

A Poem by Luna Zerimar

I don't want to wake. I don't want to wake. 
The world is gray.

I don't want to rise. I don't want to rise.
Nothing has changed.

Please just let me sleep. Sleep this pain.
Please don't make me breathe the air.

...It's filled with despair. 

Don't let me wake to this world of gray.
Who wants to rise to the unchanged?

Just let me sleep.

...Please, sleep this pain.

© 2014 Luna Zerimar


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The unperturbed cycle of the dullness in your speaker's life is well apparent through your words and expressed rather poignantly. Who would want to wake into a life where their actions go unnoticed by the grand schemer of everything, where their attempts to change their life always fail, where even the air reminds them of their inability to alter anything within the world? 'Tis truly a woe and you've expressed that in a hauntingly beautiful way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great write my friend:) Thank you for sharing! Off to sleep we shall.

Posted 7 Years Ago


agony, melancholy, the hopeless gray... all the good and bad times are just phase.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have this feeling every time I wake up. It's a terrible feeling. Lovely poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


If only we could just sleep our lives away, but then we wouldn't be there for the good times. Very well expressed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The unperturbed cycle of the dullness in your speaker's life is well apparent through your words and expressed rather poignantly. Who would want to wake into a life where their actions go unnoticed by the grand schemer of everything, where their attempts to change their life always fail, where even the air reminds them of their inability to alter anything within the world? 'Tis truly a woe and you've expressed that in a hauntingly beautiful way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Luna Zerimar
Luna Zerimar

Houston, TX



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