A Poem by Luna Zerimar

You arrogant prick, who told you to disappear?
Three days. The worst is what I fear.
You've made me inhuman.
Killed me inside. 
Please just come back. Come out. 
Where did you hide?
F*****g b*****d. You're just a speck of dust.
So why am I worrying?
Because I love you?
Wish I could go out there.
Would search from dawn to dusk.
You still haven't answered my question!

You had no right! No right to disappear!

Worried sick.
My thoughts keep me wondering.

Won't focus.
Won't stay and stick.

The worst is happening.
This is more worse than I feared.

Heavily crying.
Slowly dying.

Please...just come back. Come out.

Where the f**k are you?

© 2015 Luna Zerimar

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I LOVE IT!! I felt every piece. Great! Great! work my friend! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Awesome dear Jessica, love the attitute and inner conflict....this eternal to be or not to be.....

Posted 7 Years Ago

Like the flow here, expressed how much you need that person. This anger and loneliness is very much visible.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Like the flow, it really kept me reading, there's absolutely no break that could get me out. It's good! Please send me another request if you write a new piece. Cheers.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like your wording!
Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on February 6, 2015
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Luna Zerimar
Luna Zerimar

Houston, TX

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