Poetry like dancing

Collaboration my dance with MsJewel

twirls on a breeze, as soft as sonnet

the wind in my hair, your breath on my neck….”

a million white lights, a sparkling blur

interlacing lines of heaven and her

small circles of paradise that mean so much

swayed by the gentle rhythm felt in her touch

she counts my heartbeat, timing our grooves

I'm true to her form, unfurling her moves

tip toeing stanzas on stairways to dreams

eyes veiled with whispers, melting at the seams

the scent of her hair, the touch of her skin

arouses my senses, passion rushes in

as swift as the night, as soft as the beat

of sensuous rhyme in a sweet repeat

twilight ’s upon us, yet love lingers on

in beauty, two poets dancing ‘til dawn

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am so fond of Julie's poetry and can see her in this...
a very passionate write, stirs the heart and has perfect movement in its rhythm and rhyme.
Nicely done you two.

keep dancing.
j.