Done

 I am completely,

And utterly,

Defeated,

 

I am far past,

And will remain that way,

Loving you,

 

I am finished,

Remembering you,

And the lies you instilled upon me,

 

I am going to kill,

That frozen part of my heart,

That used to contain you,

 

I am finished,

My once love,

I am done...

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

This is a great poem just the feeling we all hate to encounter in our every day lives and relationships. Very realistic and creative.

-Will

[Hello, Goodbye]

Love the anticipation in its flow, and I can relate to feeling of utter despondency. Its brevity is a plus also, for it keeps the message short, dark, and to the point.