Trickster Of The Spinning Wheel

Trickster Of The Spinning Wheel

A Poem by *~Kristy~*

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Trickster of the spinning wheel,
Enters my effulgent domain to ratify a deal,
Upon ancient grounds he bows, accompanied by a sly grin,
The evil in his eyes reflecting a lifetime of unrepented sin,
He intends to entomb me in filth,
Amongst his artifice I fear my kingdom shall wilt,

I feel a harrowing ambience amongst his presence,
The aura of precipice weighs down on me with much excrescence,
His soul reflects a red eyed demon of fire,
The urgency for him to vacate my throne room is becoming dire,
He narrows his crimson eyes and smiles wide with rotting yellow teeth,
I shook at the intention beyond; the intention beneath,

"Begone foul creature!
Demon of hell; soul leecher!"
I cried in a broken coarse voice,
Stood with a tall but trembling poise,
Withdrew my sword and thrust it through his breast,
Thousands of glittering mirror shards fell to the ground - I have passed the test.

© 2010 *~Kristy~*


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You have an interesting rather deep vocabulary Kristy, spread out into story land.
I visualized the stories intensity. Being honest, work it again it's worth it find the rhythm with them heavy words. Mind a small example. 2nd line... an simplfy.

Enters effulgent domains an ratify a deal. Points to your subject, creepy guy.
I liked it, polish and you could be awesome with... experience. Work it you.


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, this is an amazing write.. I love the way you constructed it, all the possible innuendos, and the depth involved in this piece. Thank you for sharing :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have an interesting rather deep vocabulary Kristy, spread out into story land.
I visualized the stories intensity. Being honest, work it again it's worth it find the rhythm with them heavy words. Mind a small example. 2nd line... an simplfy.

Enters effulgent domains an ratify a deal. Points to your subject, creepy guy.
I liked it, polish and you could be awesome with... experience. Work it you.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is wonderful.
Has a wonderful rhyme scheme and flows very well.
This is a very well written write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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*~Kristy~*
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