Beautiful Blue Eyes

Beautiful Blue Eyes

A Poem by *~Kristy~*

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Your eyes are so brilliantly blue,

And,

As we lie in the silent stillness of impending dawn,

I gaze into them intensely,

Green and yellow; gray and blue,

Are the colors,

That so flawlessly fuse.

 

As they blend,

Like the incandescent colors,

Of the mornings interchanging sky,

I whisper to you softly,

Amid the restless struggle,

Of luminosity and gloom,

“I will always love you.”

 

I’m dreaming in dazzling colors,

Waiting for the day,

Of the freedom to love,

And to choose,

Who it is I want;

Which will forever be,

You.

 

And now,

That the words have been bled,

From this pencil,

The blazing desire,

To love and roam free,

Glistens in the depraved darkness,

That lives within me.

© 2010 *~Kristy~*


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Amazingly beautiful work here. Great imagery of the blue eyes. The stanzas flow wonderfully. One of my favourite lines has to be "of luminosity and gloom, 'I will always love you." Simply beautiful.
The ending is superbly written too. The way youdescribe it enchants the reader. "The blazing desire." Simply beautiful. Well done. Simply Well done.

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Your words are very colorful and imaginative. I like the way you fused your words into something beautiful and creative. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

now thats love. great job nice piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wow, bled from a pencil... that is beautiful. I write with a typewriter, but my hoves tend to hit the wrong key on occasion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, that's sweet. Much love for this one!!! ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazingly beautiful work here. Great imagery of the blue eyes. The stanzas flow wonderfully. One of my favourite lines has to be "of luminosity and gloom, 'I will always love you." Simply beautiful.
The ending is superbly written too. The way youdescribe it enchants the reader. "The blazing desire." Simply beautiful. Well done. Simply Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing.

I am so touched by this, it flows so beautifully, and the imagery is just hypnotic.

The last stanza is particularly beautiful- "And now, the words have been bled... The blazing desire to love and roam free, glistens in the depraved darkness within me" That makes me shiver.

Really beautiful piece.



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely wonderful. The imagery...just, wow!

"As they blend,
Like the incandescent colors,
Of the mornings interchanging sky"

You brought this scene sharply into view. Loved it. To my libraray this goes.

~True





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful. You have such a way with words and the descriptions are just perfect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. this is AMAZING work. its so descriptive that i can just see it happening.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way the pencil expressed the deep-felt emotion and the sense of longing for what cannot be in the now... Good images, especially of the colours, that support the emotional intensity, underpinned by some nice alliterative phrases.. a romantic tour de force!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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*~Kristy~*
*~Kristy~*

Williamsburg, KY



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I'm 24 years old I am a happily married woman as of April 30th, 2011 I have two kitties that I adore My husband and my little sister are the lights of my life I've been a writers since I was .. more..

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